Grace went to the pet shop to choose a new pet. Listen to her read her recount and find out what she chose. Grace drew her pictures using KidPix and Ora videoed her.
Grace I like your story but could you tell us what it felt like when you were on the pony. How long was the horses hair!!! Hope you remember, see you at school. Ora ( your buddy).
Hi Ora. When I was on the pony I felt scared because the horse was going too fast. The person behind me made the pony stop. The horses hair was medium and was white. Thanks for looking at my story. Grace
Interesting story, Grace. I like the detail in your illustration.
ReplyDeleteGrace I like your story but could you tell us what it felt like when you were on the pony. How long was the horses hair!!! Hope you remember, see you at school. Ora ( your buddy).
ReplyDeleteHi Ora. When I was on the pony I felt scared because the horse was going too fast. The person behind me made the pony stop. The horses hair was medium and was white. Thanks for looking at my story.
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Dear Grace I Liked your story from Zoe
ReplyDeleteDear Grace I THOUGHT you spoke clearly.
ReplyDeleteI rode the same pony as you
ReplyDeleteTO GRACE I LIKED YOUR STORY FROM JOANNA
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