cool! I like it! you guys are good at writing poems.From David Yang
Dear Aart and RyanYour poem is very good! I like how you described the leaves. Good writing. I enjoyed listening to it.From Charlotte (Aart's sister)=)
Dear Aart and RyanI like your poem and it's really fantastic.From will (Aart's brother)
Ryan reckon he read their poem out really clearly but he didn't make a good post at the end. :)
Hey Aart and Ryan,I love your poem because it really described every sentence which was brilliant to listen to!From Hansi(Ashane`s Big Sister)
Aart and RyanLove both of your poems, they describes the cascade of autumn so well.Mark (Aarts Dad)
Great speaking Ryan,You thought well for what to say.
cool! I like it! you guys are good at writing poems.
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Dear Aart and Ryan
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very good! I like how you described the leaves. Good writing. I enjoyed listening to it.
From Charlotte (Aart's sister)
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Dear Aart and Ryan
ReplyDeleteI like your poem and it's really fantastic.
From will (Aart's brother)
Ryan reckon he read their poem out really clearly but he didn't make a good post at the end. :)
ReplyDeleteHey Aart and Ryan,
ReplyDeleteI love your poem because it really described every sentence which was brilliant to listen to!
From Hansi(Ashane`s Big Sister)
Aart and Ryan
ReplyDeleteLove both of your poems, they describes the cascade of autumn so well.
Mark (Aarts Dad)
Great speaking Ryan,You thought well for what to say.
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