Wednesday, September 23, 2009

The cat fell in the fish tank by Vianni

Vianni wrote this narrative about a rather hungry cat. What did it do?

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  1. Room6 and Mrs McGhieSeptember 24, 2009 at 11:59 AM

    Hi Vianni
    I loved your story how you used a very clear voice. Why did the cat jump in the fish bowl?

    By AS
    Room6

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  2. Room6and Mrs McGhieSeptember 24, 2009 at 10:32 PM

    Dear Vianni

    I liked your pictures they were colourful and detailed. Also I liked the the words that you used in your story.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2009 at 10:34 PM

    Dear Vianni


    I liked your lovely picture it was detailed with lots of colours. Also I liked the words you used in your story.

    From MB

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  4. AbbeySeptember 24, 2009 at 10:41 PM

    wow your cat must of been hungry if he wanted to jump in a tank with the fish!I loved the pictures that you used!
    WELL DONE
    from Abbey

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