Monday, December 7, 2009

Cleaning the floor by Hanbin

Listen to Hanbin read his narrative about a very kind Mum who had just finished cleaning her floor. What did she do at the end of the story?

8 comments:

  1. dear Hanbin. I realy liked your story.fromAc-b

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  2. you have a nice slide show Habin. We liked how you used a clear voice and your bright colours. by N.M M.B N.G.P E.F

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  3. Hi Hanbin we all like your story and we love your pictures.

    by Es

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  4. Hi Hanbin we all like your story and we love your pictures.

    by Es

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  5. I like it i like the bit when the mum cleaning the house like sparling stars mc

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  6. Mrs McGhie and room 6December 13, 2009 at 10:56 PM

    that was really cool I liked when you shouted at the dad and the son

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  7. Mrs McGhie and room 6December 13, 2009 at 11:04 PM

    good pictures and we loved how you spoke.from
    K.H

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