Hello Room 15, I have enjoyed listening to your poems about Autumn leaves. You have used some wonderful language to describe what you saw when you went on your walk. I can see that you have worked hard to present these to a very high standard! Thanks for sharing them through the blog. Mrs Stewart.
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Room 1 2014
Room 1 2014
Room 1 2014
Room 1 2014
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Dear room 15
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem! I liked how you used very descriptive words and the whole poem was very creative. You could be the next Joy Cowley!!
From Emma (room 10)
To Joanna and Vianni and Summer
ReplyDeleteI like your autumn poem, they're really fantastic.
From Aart
Hello Room 15, I have enjoyed listening to your poems about Autumn leaves. You have used some wonderful language to describe what you saw when you went on your walk. I can see that you have worked hard to present these to a very high standard! Thanks for sharing them through the blog. Mrs Stewart.
ReplyDeleteI liked reading my poem and I spoke a little bit clearly.
ReplyDeleteDear Joanna and Vianni and Summer
ReplyDeleteI like your poem it is cool
from grace
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I love your poem. It was great, because you spoke clearly and discriptively. It was a nice story and I liked it!!!
ReplyDeleteNeve
I love your poem. It was great, because you spoke clearly and discriptively. It was a nice story and I liked it!!!
ReplyDeleteNeve
To Joanna, Vianni and Summer,
ReplyDeleteI love your poem. It was great because you spoke clearly and discriptively.
From Neve
Great poems Joanna,Vianni and Summer!
ReplyDeleteFrom Hansi(Ashane`s Big Sister)
To summer and Vianni I love your poems they were great I liked them from Neve
ReplyDeletegreat poems, all read very well, nice and clear, well done VIanni, Joanna and Summer.
ReplyDeleteI liked my poem From Joanna
ReplyDeleteI like Summers autumn poem. It made
ReplyDeleteme happy. The leaves were colourful.
To Vianni and Summer I like your poems about autumn. I will see you on Thursday and I will see you at school. from Joanna
ReplyDeleteI love my poems I spoke clearly. I am great at speaking.
ReplyDeleteI LIKE MY POEM I SPOKE CLEARLY FROM JOANNA
ReplyDeleteTo Joanna I liked your poem and you spoke clearly. From Katharine.
ReplyDeleteTo Joanna
ReplyDeleteI like your poem. You spoke clearly.
From Katharine.
well done guys ,amazing work
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because it was cool
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