Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Going to mini golf by Ashane

Listen to Ashane read this personal recount about playing mini golf with his Dad and sister Hansi. Ashane drew his pictures on KidPix and Liam videoed him.


12 comments:

  1. Ashane I liked the way you read your story. - Julius

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  2. Ashane I liked the way you read your storty. hanbin

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  3. Ashane I liked the way you read your storty. hanbin

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  4. I liked the way I read my story. When I said bat it wasn't a bat it was a PUTT. FROM ASAHNE

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  5. I liked the way how I read my story and when I said in the weekend it was funny. From Ashane

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  6. When I spoke I was great.From Ashane

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  7. I liked the way I read my story and when my Dad hit the ball it went out of the course. The rules said don't hit the ball so hard. From Ashane

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  8. When I played mini golf I won and my Dad was 2nd and my big sister was last. From Ashane

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  9. When I played mini golf it was fun. From Ashane

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  10. It was great hearing your story about mini golf Ashane it was fun. by Hanbin

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  11. I really like your Minigolf story Ashane, which we all enjoyed.
    Dad

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  12. You did a great job Ashane and you did a great poem.

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