Saturday, August 29, 2009

Going to the movies by Hanbin

Hanbin wrote a narrative about going to the movies. How did the teenagers get the attention of the lady with the big hat?


3 comments:

  1. Hi Hanbin
    We really liked how you used descriptive words in your story. You read your story in a nice, loud, clear voice. We also liked the way your story had a problem and you solved it in such a clever way at the end.
    From Room 6 & Mrs McGhie

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  2. Hanbin I liked your pictures and I like your story too.

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