Sunday, May 10, 2009

Autumn poems by Brodie and Mark

We went on an autumn walk. Then we wrote autumn poems. Listen to these poems written by Brodie and Mark


41 comments:

  1. Brodie I liked the way you spoke very nicely and softly YOU AND MARK ARE GOOD READERS I LOVED IT ORA

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  2. Both of you have written great poems. I liked the way you spoke so confidently. Well done Marky and Brodie.
    From
    Mrs Buckley (Mummy)

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  3. they are really cool poems they are very interesting.

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  4. I really liked your Autumn poems, those adjectives are awesome.
    From Daniel Adamson

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  5. I LOVE MY POEM AND IT WAS VERY GOOD. WHEN I DID MY POEM I LIKED DOING IT. WHEN BRODIE VIDEOED ME I WAS TALKING.

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  6. Brodie when you were talking It was very good and Brodie when you did your poem IT WAS VERY GOOD

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  7. I liked hearing my poem on the internet. It was fun - Brodie

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  8. I liked hearing those poems. They were awesome. I also liked the clear speaking.
    Ryan Harrison

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  9. I just love hearing myself speaking and Mark videoing me.

    FROM
    BRODIE

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  10. Brodie and Mark,

    Well done fellows!

    This is a great poem.

    From Dad

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  11. Mark,

    You have written a fantastic poem. You must be proud of what you have done.

    Dale

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  12. Brodie,

    This is a fantastic poem. Listening to you I can picture Autum in my mind.

    Dad

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  13. Hey Guys,

    WELL DONE !

    From a BIG Fan

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  14. when I was talking mark held the camrra very still.


    BRODIE

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  15. I liked the way I described it.

    BRODIE

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  16. I loved my poem it was cool. it had ing words.

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  17. It was cool reading my poem it was fun because I spoke on the flip video.

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  18. I liked my poems it is fun reading it .

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  19. Brodie you are great

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  20. What nice poems Brodie and Mark, I enjoyed listening to them.
    Deirdre

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  21. To Brodie I like your autumn poems from Aart

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  22. To brodie i like the poems from Aart

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  23. brodie you are fantastic

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  24. Good work mark you did a good Job I liked it


    BRODIE

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  25. Brodie WHEN YOU were talking it was very good it was fantastic. I like POEMS LIKE YOURS BRODIE.

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  26. Brodie I like YOUR Autumn poems.

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  27. To Brodie I like your poems from Aart

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  28. IT WAS FUN reading my poem I like mark being my buddy


    BRODIE

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  29. Brodie you spoke really clearly your buddy Liam

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  30. Well Done Brodie

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  31. What did it feel like Brodie ?

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  32. you spoke well Brodie and Mark.From Ashane

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  33. Brodie You spoke clearly Brodie

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  34. Brodie, when you took a photo, what did it feel like? from mark.

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  35. How long did it take you to make this piece of work Mark?

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  36. It took me a week thanks Brodie

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  37. It was fun taking photos I took a couple of photos then I passed it to the next person.

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  38. Brodie I Like your Autumm poems

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  39. Brodie nice writing.

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  40. I talked very clearly

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