Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Autumn poems by Joanna, Vianni and Summer

We went on an autumn walk and had a lot of fun throwing leaves in the air. Listen to Joanna, Vianni and Summer read their poems about autumn.

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20 comments:

  1. Dear room 15

    I loved your poem! I liked how you used very descriptive words and the whole poem was very creative. You could be the next Joy Cowley!!

    From Emma (room 10)

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  2. To Joanna and Vianni and Summer
    I like your autumn poem, they're really fantastic.
    From Aart

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  3. Hello Room 15, I have enjoyed listening to your poems about Autumn leaves. You have used some wonderful language to describe what you saw when you went on your walk. I can see that you have worked hard to present these to a very high standard! Thanks for sharing them through the blog. Mrs Stewart.

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  4. I liked reading my poem and I spoke a little bit clearly.

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  5. Dear Joanna and Vianni and Summer
    I like your poem it is cool
    from grace












    n

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  6. I love your poem. It was great, because you spoke clearly and discriptively. It was a nice story and I liked it!!!

    Neve

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  7. I love your poem. It was great, because you spoke clearly and discriptively. It was a nice story and I liked it!!!

    Neve

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  8. To Joanna, Vianni and Summer,

    I love your poem. It was great because you spoke clearly and discriptively.

    From Neve

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  9. Hansi DissanayakeMay 18, 2009 at 8:31 PM

    Great poems Joanna,Vianni and Summer!
    From Hansi(Ashane`s Big Sister)

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  10. To summer and Vianni I love your poems they were great I liked them from Neve

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  11. great poems, all read very well, nice and clear, well done VIanni, Joanna and Summer.

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  12. I liked my poem From Joanna

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  13. I like Summers autumn poem. It made
    me happy. The leaves were colourful.

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  14. To Vianni and Summer I like your poems about autumn. I will see you on Thursday and I will see you at school. from Joanna

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  15. I love my poems I spoke clearly. I am great at speaking.

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  16. I LIKE MY POEM I SPOKE CLEARLY FROM JOANNA

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  17. To Joanna I liked your poem and you spoke clearly. From Katharine.

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  18. To Joanna

    I like your poem. You spoke clearly.

    From Katharine.

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  19. well done guys ,amazing work

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  20. I like your poem because it was cool

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