Thursday, May 7, 2009

Autumn poems by Aart and Ryan

Listen to Aart and Ryan read their poems.

7 comments:

  1. cool! I like it! you guys are good at writing poems.
    From David Yang

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  2. Dear Aart and Ryan
    Your poem is very good! I like how you described the leaves. Good writing. I enjoyed listening to it.
    From Charlotte (Aart's sister)
    =)

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  3. Dear Aart and Ryan
    I like your poem and it's really fantastic.
    From will (Aart's brother)

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  4. Ryan reckon he read their poem out really clearly but he didn't make a good post at the end. :)

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  5. Hansi DissanayakeMay 18, 2009 at 8:23 PM

    Hey Aart and Ryan,
    I love your poem because it really described every sentence which was brilliant to listen to!
    From Hansi(Ashane`s Big Sister)

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  6. Aart and Ryan

    Love both of your poems, they describes the cascade of autumn so well.

    Mark (Aarts Dad)

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  7. Great speaking Ryan,You thought well for what to say.

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