Sunday, September 13, 2009

The teenagers went to the movies by Ryan

Ryan wrote this narrative and drew the pictures on KidPix. Why didn't the lady move?


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13 comments:

  1. Dear Room 15

    Thank you for visiting our blog last week and leaving such a lovely comment. You also asked us two very wonderful questions and we haven't answered them yet.

    We felt dreadful that we hadn't replied to you yet but we had such a busy week last week as we were having to rehearse EVERY day for our school production which is on 3 days this week. We weren't in our classroom very much at all last week and hope that you will accept our apologies for not replying to you sooner.

    To answer your first question - our pirates were looking for gold and jewels. We had to write very careful instructions so that the pirates could find the treasure easily.

    Your second question was about our bees on the background. At the top of our blog there is a little box that says "The Cutest Blog on the Block.com". If you click on that little box it will take you to the website where Mrs McGhie found our background. She had to follow some instructions and copy and paste a little bit of computer code (special computer language) into a special box on our blog to make the background show up. Mrs McGhie said it is really easy to do so we're sure your teacher will be able to do it too.

    We're loving listening to all of your stories and information reports at the moment, you are very clever writers.

    From Room 6 and Mrs McGhie

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  2. I like your pictures on kids pix

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  3. I liked how the teenagers solved the problem with the grown up. When did the teenagers get the tickets?
    From AT
    Room 6

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  4. I liked your expression in your voice. Why did the teenagers sit in front of the lady?
    From HL
    Room 6

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  5. I like it because they thought what they would do and they did it.
    From ES
    Room 6

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  6. Dear HL
    Thank you for watching my story.
    The teenager sat in front of the lady because she had a very big hat so they couldn't see the movie.

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  7. Dear MC
    The movie was about a one-eyed monster who breathes fire from his nose with red eyebrows that is defeated by super heroes and made into a puddle of mud
    Thank you for reading my story.

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  8. your pictures are really cool

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  9. Ryan what was the lady called that came in the middle of the movie.

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  10. Dear AT
    The teenagers got their tickets before the movie.
    Thank you for watching my story.

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  11. Your pictures are really cool and interesting and they look real!

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  12. To Ryan you did very interesting
    pictures

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