Tuesday, December 8, 2009

The lady that cleaned the floor By Mark

Mark wrote this narrative. Listen to the way he reads his story with expression.


8 comments:

  1. It was so good i like it

    M.c

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  2. That was a lovely story it was superly extreme! story we realy loved it it was so great we so much loved it

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  3. Nice expression Mark and nice presentation. Your picture is brilliant.

    from A.S B.M S.M and D.S.

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  4. You had a nice loud vocie when you said "get out of my house" and your pictures were really nice. N.G.P M.B E.F N.M

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  5. Mrs McGhie and room 6December 13, 2009 at 10:57 PM

    Nice expression and we loved your descriptive words from t.p

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  6. Mrs McGhie and room 6December 13, 2009 at 11:03 PM

    That was a lovely story it was superbly extreme! story we really loved it it was so great we so much loved it

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